10K Day

Nov 17, 2015 13:09
Have you ever thought about the 10 thousandth day from your birthday?

The day, which you might call 10K day, will come after 4 months and 16 days from when you become 27 years old.

In my case, the day had imperceptibly passed.

I think there are not many people who are aware of this day (at least in Japan).

Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lovers or friends, it will be surely a smashing success.

I think it will be also a great success to celebrate the 10 thousandth day from your marriage
生誕10000日記念

生誕10000日目がいつかを考えたことがありますか？

それは27歳になってから、4ヶ月と16日ほど後にやってきます。

私は去年、いつの間にか過ぎていました。

あまりこの日を意識している人は多くないと思います。

恋人や友人にサプライズを仕掛ければ、きっと大成功するでしょう。

結婚10000日記念などでも大成功することと思います。
No. 1　Aiumi's correction
  • Have you ever thought about the 10 thousandth day from your birthday?
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • The day, which you might call 10K day, will come after 4 months and 16 days from when you become 27 years old.
  • The day, which you might call the 10K day, will come 4 months and 16 days after you turn 27.
  • In my case, the day had imperceptibly passed.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I think there are not many people who are aware of this day (at least in Japan).
  • I don't think there are many people who are aware of this day (at least in Japan).
  • Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lovers or friends, it will be surely a smashing success.
  • Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lovers or friends, it will surely be a smashing success.
  • I think it will be also a great success to celebrate the 10 thousandth day from your marriage
  • I think it will be also a great success to celebrate the 10 thousandth day from your marriage.
    　'would' sounds a little better than 'will' here, but this sentence is okay.
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D
No. 2　デクラン's correction
  • 10K Day
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Have you ever thought about the 10 thousandth day from your birthday?
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • The day, which you might call 10K day, will come after 4 months and 16 days from when you become 27 years old.
  • The day, which you might call 10K Day, will come after 4 months and 16 days from your 27th birthday
  • In my case, the day had imperceptibly passed.
  • In my case, the day had imperceptibly passed.
  • I think there are not many people who are aware of this day (at least in Japan).
  • I don't think there are many people who are aware of this day (at least in Japan).
  • Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lovers or friends, it will be surely a smashing success.
  • Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your boyfriends, girlfriends or friends, it will surely be a smashing success.
    　'Lovers' in't wrong, I just don't like the word. It sounds a little weird, haha
  • I think it will be also a great success to celebrate the 10 thousandth day from your marriage
  • I think celebrating the 10 thousandth day from your marriage will also be a great success
The ten thousandth day after my birth will be June 1st 2024! Only 9 and half years to go, haha
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
It sounds like a long time, my ten years passed all too soon!
No. 3　Timmy's correction
  • Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lovers or friends, it will be surely a smashing success.
  • Therefore, if you hold a surprise birthday party for your lover (or: significant other) or friends, it will surely be a smashing success.
Interesting! The number looks scary though))
kanotown
Thank you so much always for correcting my post! :)
Haha, it's also scary for me.
Timmy
You're welcome!^_^
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